Edward Scissorhands

I've been here, waiting, for quite a long time now. For what, I'm afraid I do not know. Yet when trapped in the confines of a darkened cell, you always ...

Thank you! And I will change those Errors after school. :)

Well, there'll be a brief description of the forest in later chapter, so you'll see what happened to it. ^^ As for the other chapters, sure i'll PM you!

Chapter 1- The Beginning The semiprecious, winged creatures of lore. They were said to be once humans, but then their DNA fused with the elements around them. Now, they are ...

Thank you greatlly, both! I'll be posting the first part of my story soon!

Thank you very much, Weatherstorm!

Thank you very much, both of you! ^^

Thank you, Kim. ^^

Okay, thank you for those critations. They'll help me in future poetry. I usually write in Russian, then translate into English, so some of the words may be different.

Very well written! I enjoyed it! ^^

Note from the Author: Please, don't treat this poem like just a poem. Though it has only been written recentlly by myself, I feel it is already a piece of ...

((Soldat- A Russian Soldier.)) Halt, Arise, Awake, Fire, Where have I risen? Am I lost? This forest that surrounds me, Holds no familiar faces, Halt, Arise, Awake, Fire, Where am ...

Well, those are the words my English teacher is telling me to use, so... Well, you get the point. ^^ Never doubt the teacher! And thank you very much, Reyu! ...

Why thank you! :)

Very nice! :)